SPLASH! SPLASH! I rather think she is going to have a big splash, she really feels frightened already. She can smell the fresh sea water and feel the cold wind pushing her side to side.
She can see the bright sun and the watery blue sky. She is wearing an orange life jacket like an angry tiger waiting to devour her prey. Her hair is shining like bright silver.
she thinks that she might not jump into the ocean because she thinks that the ocean is too scary to jump into water, She is really frightened a lot I think she is not going to swim into the deep blue sea.
By Taylar
Well done Taylor great work,but your supposed to imagine the girl is you and do you know what devour means but apart from that good job.
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