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Wednesday, 10 September 2014

The big ocean jump

SPLASH! SPLASH!   I rather think  she is going to have a big splash,   she really feels frightened already. She can smell the fresh sea water  and feel the cold wind pushing her side to side.


She can see the bright sun and the watery blue sky. She is wearing an orange life jacket  like an angry tiger waiting to devour her prey.  Her hair is shining like  bright silver.


she thinks that she might not jump into the ocean because she thinks that the ocean is too scary to jump into water, She is really frightened a lot I think she is not going to swim into the deep blue sea.
By Taylar

1 comment:

  1. Hi Taylar,
    I like how started with a sound. Your beginning hooked me in. Is this a narrative or a moment in time? Keep up the good work Taylar!

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