Hi Taylar, I like all the beautiful colours on the title page, the little subtitle that you did and the way you told me the ten things you want to do. On your third slide you could make the font a different colour so it's easier for the reader to read.This makes me want to go there right now, When you go there I hope you have a good time and maybe I will meet you there because I am going there to. Good job and Keep up the good work.
Hi Taylar, I really liked how you used Disneyland and your fav stuff that you want to chose and the stuff that you wish for that might or will come true. keep it up Taylar
Hi Taylar, I really liked how you used Disneyland and your fav stuff that you want to chose and the stuff that you wish for that might or will come true. keep it up Taylar
That was amazing!! I would love to go and bungee jump as well!! Maybe you should write something about your friend next time! If you got time would you like to visit my blog >>>>>>>>>>>> http://wpspaulinel.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi taylar, I love how you put your each of your aspirations on each slide and put each one of them with pictures.I also love how you put nice bright colors it make it look fantastic.I would also love to go to disneyland.
Hi Taylar,
ReplyDeleteI like all the beautiful colours on the title page, the little subtitle that you did and the way you told me the ten things you want to do. On your third slide you could make the font a different colour so it's easier for the reader to read.This makes me want to go there right now, When you go there I hope you have a good time and maybe I will meet you there because I am going there to. Good job and Keep up the good work.
By:Ferah
Hi Taylar,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you used Disneyland and your fav stuff that you want to chose and the stuff that you wish for that might or will come true. keep it up Taylar
By May
Hi Taylar,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you used Disneyland and your fav stuff that you want to chose and the stuff that you wish for that might or will come true. keep it up Taylar
By May
Hi Taylar I love your dream. My dream is that I want to go to rainbows end.
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing!! I would love to go and bungee jump as well!! Maybe you should write something about your friend next time! If you got time would you like to visit my blog >>>>>>>>>>>> http://wpspaulinel.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi taylar,
ReplyDeleteI love how you put your each of your aspirations on each slide and put each one of them with pictures.I also love how you put nice bright colors it make it look fantastic.I would also love to go to disneyland.
From, Karla
nice background keep it up
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